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Jargon to Avoid in Scientific and Technical Writing
The following is a list of words, expressions and jargon to avoid in scientific and technical writing. The original list was posted on EST-L on the Internet with permission from the author by students of Roy Bowers, Center for Biological Research, La Paz, Mexico and posted on the Web (http://www.cibnor.conacyt.mx/est/day.html). The list was transcribed from Robert A. Day's outstanding books on technical writing:
- Day, Robert A. "How to Write and Publish a Scientific Paper". I.S.I Press, Philadelphia, Penn. 1979
- Day, Robert A. "Scientific English: A Guide for Scientists and Other Professionals". Oryx Press, Phoenix, Arizona. 1992. (now in its 2nd edition)
Additions added to the original list come from:
- Day, Robert A. "How To Write & Publish a Scientific Paper: 5th Edition". 3rd ed. Oryx Press, Phoenix, AZ, 1988. (now in its 5th edition)
- Redish, Janice C.; Felker, Daniel B.; Pickering, Frances; Charrow, Veda R.; and Holland, V. Melissa "Guidelines for Document Designers a Product of the Document Design Project Funded by the National Institute of Education". American Institutes for Research, Washington, D.C. 1981.
- Style guidelines from Cynthia Lockley, IBM Corporation, and others.
Also see the Complete List of Banished Words issued on 1 January each year since 1975 by Lake Superior State University (LSSU); Michigan's smallest public university with an enrollment of 3,000 students. See http://www.lssu.edu/banished/ for the story behind the list.
| Avoid | Use instead |
|---|---|
| a considerable amount of | much |
| a considerable number of | many |
| a great number of times | often |
| a majority of | most |
| a number of | some |
| a small number of | a few |
| absolutely essential | essential |
| accompany | go with |
| accounted for by the fact that | because |
| adjacent to | near |
| afford an opportunity | let |
| along the lines of | like |
| an example of this fact that | for example |
| an order of magnitude faster | 10 times faster |
| apparent | clear |
| approximately | about |
| are of the same opinion | agree |
| as a consequence of | because |
| as a matter of fact | in fact (or leave out) |
| as a means of | to |
| as is the case | as happens |
| as of this date | today |
| as to | about (or leave out) |
| as to whether | whether |
| at a rapid rate | rapidly |
| at an early date | soon |
| at an earlier date | previously |
| at some future time | later |
| at the conclusion of | after |
| at the present time | now |
| at this point in time | now |
| based on the fact that | because |
| be advised that | (leave out) |
| by means of | by, with |
| capability | ability |
| causal factor | cause |
| caveat | warning |
| completely full | full |
| component | part |
| consensus of opinion | consensus |
| considerable amount of | much |
| deem | think |
| definitely proved | proved |
| despite the fact that | although |
| due to the fact that | because |
| during the course of | during, while |
| during the time that | while |
| echelons | levels |
| elucidate | explain |
| employ | use |
| enclosed herewith | enclosed |
| encounter | meet |
| end result | result |
| endeavor | try |
| entirely eliminate | eliminate |
| equivalent | equal |
| eventuate | happen |
| evidenced | showed |
| fabricate | make |
| facilitate | ease, help |
| fatal outcome | death |
| fewer in number | fewer |
| finalize | end |
| first of all | first |
| following | after |
| for a period of | for |
| for the purpose of | for |
| for the reason that | because |
| from the point of view | for |
| from the time that | since |
| future plans | plans |
| give an account of | describe |
| give consideration to | consider |
| give rise to | cause |
| has been engaged in a study of | has studied |
| has the capability of | can |
| have the appearance of | look like |
| having regard to | about |
| impact (v.) | affect |
| important essentials | essentials |
| in a number of cases | some |
| in a position to | can, may |
| in a satisfactory manner | satisfactorily |
| in a timely manner | promptly |
| in a very real sense | in a sense (or leave out) |
| in almost all instances | nearly always |
| in case | if |
| in close proximity to | close, near |
| in connection with | about, concerning |
| in lieu of | instead of |
| in many cases | often |
| in my opinion it is not an unjustifiable assumption that | I think |
| in order to | to |
| in reference to | about |
| in relation to | about, towards, toward |
| in respect to | about |
| in some cases | sometimes |
| in spite of the fact that | although |
| in terms of | about |
| in the absence of | without |
| in the amount of | for |
| in the event that | if |
| in the first place | first |
| in the matter of | about |
| in the not-too-distant future | soon |
| in the possession of | has, have |
| in the range of | about |
| in the vicinity of | about |
| in view of the fact that | because |
| inasmuch as | because |
| inception | start |
| incline to the view | think |
| incumbent upon | must |
| initiate | begin, start |
| is defined as | is |
| it goes without saying that I | I |
| it has been reported by Smith | Smith reported |
| it has long been known that | (I haven't bothered to look up the reference) |
| it is apparent that | apparently |
| it is believed that | I think |
| it is clear that | clearly |
| it is clear that much additional work will be required before a complete understanding | (I don't understand it) |
| it is doubtful that | possibly |
| it is evident that A produced B | A produced B |
| it is generally believed | many think |
| it is my understanding that | I understand that |
| it is of interest to note that | (leave out) |
| it is often the case that | often |
| it is recommended that | we recommend |
| it is worth pointing out in this context that | note that |
| it may be that | I think |
| it may, however, be noted that | but |
| it should be noted that | note that (or leave out) |
| it was observed in the course of these experiments that | we observed |
| join together | join |
| lacked the ability to | could not |
| large in size | large |
| let me make one thing perfectly clear | (a snow job is coming) |
| liase with | coordinate with |
| majority of | most |
| make preparations for | prepare |
| make reference to | refer to |
| methodology | method |
| militate against | prohibit |
| month of | (leave out) |
| more or less | about |
| needless to say | (leave out, and consider leaving out whatever follows it) |
| new initiatives | initiatives |
| not later than | by |
| of great theoretical and practical importance | useful |
| of long standing | old |
| of the opinion that | think that |
| on account of | because |
| on a daily basis | daily |
| on behalf of | for |
| on no occasion | never |
| on the basis of | by |
| on the grounds that | because |
| on the order of | about |
| on the other hand | although, however, otherwise |
| on the part of | by, among, for |
| on the subject of | about |
| optimum | best |
| our attention has been called to the fact that | (we belatedly discovered) |
| owing to the fact that | because |
| parameters | limits |
| penultimate | next to the last |
| perform | do |
| permit | let |
| place a major emphasis on | stress |
| pooled together | pooled |
| practicable | practical |
| presents a picture similar to | resembles |
| prior to | before |
| prioritize | rank |
| protein determinations were performed | proteins were determined |
| provided that | if |
| pursuant to | about |
| quantity | measure |
| quite | (leave out) |
| quite a large quantity of | much |
| quite unique | unique |
| rather interesting | interesting |
| re | about |
| red in color | red |
| referred to as | called |
| reference | about |
| regarding | about |
| relating to the subject matter of | about |
| relative to | about |
| remuneration | pay, payment |
| rendered completely inoperative | broken |
| respecting | about |
| resultant effect | result |
| root cause | cause |
| serious crisis | crisis |
| shortfall | shortage |
| smaller in size | smaller |
| so as to | to |
| subject matter | subject |
| subsequent to | after |
| sufficient | enough |
| take into consideration | consider |
| terminate | end |
| the great majority of | most |
| the opinion is advanced that | I think |
| the predominant number | most |
| the question as to whether | whether |
| there is a reason to believe | I think |
| this result would seem to indicate | this result indicates |
| through the use of | by, with |
| ultimate | last |
| utilize | use |
| was the opinion that | believed |
| ways and means | ways, means (not both) |
| we wish to thank | we thank |
| whether or not | whether |
| with a view to | to |
| with reference to | about (or leave out) |
| with regard to | about |
| with respect to | about, except |
| with the possible exception of | except |
| with the result that | so that |
| within the ballpark of | about |











